love story

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السلام عليكم

انا ألفت قصه حب انجليزيه وان شالله تعجبكم

once upona time
there was a beautiful girl named jessy
she is 17 years old lived in new york
her mom died when she was 12 years old
and when jessy was 15 her father got married her name
is lizzie. well jessy didnt like lizzie very much
.and lizzie didnt like jessy, couse jessy was a street girl
she was always drank. and she go out with boys and drink beer with them
one day the cops found her drinking beer
so they bunshed her. they let her clean the beach
and there she met a spanish guy he is so cuit
she didnt talked to him. and in the school jessy and her best friends skiped the class and went out to drink beer
then she saw him passing by and she waved at him and saied:hey come here
he saied: i cant i got to go to the class
jessy:come i need to talk to you
then he went to her then
?jessy saied:what is your name
hey saied: davied
jessy:oh a cuit name
davied:thanx
then jessy's best friend gave davied a beer
davied: is it a beer
jessy's bestfriend: no of course not
then he tased it ,and saied:it's a beer
then he threw the bottel on the grass
then the prencpel came and he saw the bottel on the grass and said:you all been drinking beer ,ha
then he gave them all detention even davied
so davied got mad on jessy
then jessy went to apologias to davied
then he forgive her and he invited her and her bestfriend
to his football game
so jessy and her friend went to his football game. davied's team won. so he was happy
after the game jessy waited for davied

انكمل القصه بكره
وابي اشوف رايكم في القصه وابي الصراحه لو سمحتو لاني انا امألفتها

[bnt aldo7a]

مشكورين

يا نفسي عزيزه قولي شنو الكلمات اللي غلط فيها علشان اصححها

[bnt aldo7a]

يا نفسي عزيزه

السبلنج صح مافيها شي ابي اصححك بس ماشتهي اشرح
ويكون في علمك درست في امريكا 3 سنين اوكي لا تفلسف علينا

وانا ماعتقد اني باكمل القصه

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لا عادي اتغشمر معاك ومشكور على رايك

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القصه حلوه بس شكلها طويله وايد لان فيها تفاصيل دقيقه:34:

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